Empty Spaces

Just an empty space
Where my heart use to be,
A noiseless sound
That use to be the beating of my heart
Your love has left me empty, 
Void of all emotion
Your love left me asking 
Was it really love, or just an illusion?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 30, 2010 at 11:55 AM
Thank you for posting your fasinating poetry here at PoetrySoup so we all may read it Wilma. May your weekend be one of good health and may you find joy in living and find buckets of inspiration along the way. Wishing you the best in any contest you have entered or are going to enter this weekend. Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 9:57 AM
beautiful heart-felt poem, much enjoyed
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October 30, 2010 at 8:42 AM
My dear Wilma, when its tue love you will know it..It comforting and warm nothing less..Hope your well my sweet ...Love Michael
K. Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 8:41 AM
hmmm thought provoking Wilma, quite sad especially when one never knows the answer for sure--- and happy to see you posting here :)-- Happy Halloween hugs to you-- nikko :)
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