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Reaching out to infinitude when words have come to an end. Yan Yu Presence, without; the space framed but left empty. Mountains float as a fisherman ignores, wishing only for a fish to feed his family. Empty space is space for us to not ignore. We fill it with our emptiness – and together the picture paints your presence.

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Date: 12/17/2020 1:12:00 AM
This is an excellent poem, my dear friend of God's inspirational grace, Chas. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message regarding "Empty Space." The descriptive excellence is lovely and sends terrific images. The theme of "Space" stands out, and the tone and tenor move the piece down the page with much grace. Great job! Have a fantastic day, with God's richest grace and blessings always. https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/53812816-sincerely-speaking-spiritually.
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Date: 12/15/2020 9:22:00 AM
A thought-provoking piece and beautifully rendered, Chas. Congrats on being a lifetime premium member!
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