Empty Sounds

The long night hours of waking
That haunt my very soul
The reaper stands before me
And beckons me be told

The people stand behind me
With words of empty sounds
Promises of everything
But nothing to be found

The rusty wheels are turning
Of work that should be done
The people here, Im learning
Know fools that walk as one

Where are the ones I trusted
I stand so much alone
With words and empty meanings
And a heart that’s turned to stone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Byrne Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 8:36 PM
Reminds me of zombies..............
Owens Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 9:31 PM
Nice write...those long lonely night hours of waking made me think of lonely sounds of train whistles in the night ...lol...Enjoyed...Marty
Dietrich Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 4:37 PM
You capture an eery and haunting mood with this one. I think it is great! Luv, Andrea
Palli Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 12:48 PM
Loneliness well depicted. Wish it weren't so.
Hilliker Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 9:22 AM
Oh, that's so sad. Nice rhyming pattern. Thanks for sharing.
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