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Empty sole

Your life is fading fast your eyes tell your future which is not going to last, With each new day your life's draining away never to return I'm sorry to say, I'm hurting inside i can't start to explain the pain that i feel when i see you each day, A shadow of yourself pale and gray mumbling words you forget next day, Your eyes so empty no life at all the sparkle which shone has so surly gone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 2/5/2010 3:59:00 PM
so sad, should sole be soul? Welcome to poetry soup, I have trouble with spelling so if I am wrong forgive me. I enjoyed reading your poems today.
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Date: 2/5/2010 1:38:00 PM
Sad write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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