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Empty Sea

the stars high above
swim in the inky black sea 
nudity and wine

desireseasensesspiritualhaiku

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Lenny Gazbowski

June 15, 2016 at 11:41 AM

Nicely penned.

Dalia Shahein

December 29, 2015 at 9:24 AM

Great write my friend..welcome to the soup family...Merry Christmas and happy new year. ..hugs / / :) dalia

Skat A

November 17, 2015 at 10:33 PM

Benjamin :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Punnia Viswan Bhatia

November 17, 2015 at 3:38 AM

wonderful Benjamin..welcome to PS :)

Daver Austin

November 16, 2015 at 12:57 PM

The ingredient for flaming romance. Congrats. daver

Benjamin Wormwood

November 16, 2015 at 1:06 PM

It was! (despite its brevity).

Benjamin Wormwood

November 6, 2015 at 11:35 AM

Thanks for all the lovely comments. This is the first time I have shared any of my haiku and you have all made me feel very welcome :) .

Poet Destroyer A

November 5, 2015 at 8:57 PM

Benjamin, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 5, 2015 at 11:55 AM

- Hi Benjamin :) - Welcome to P - Soup :) - A lovely haiku, a delight to read :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

November 4, 2015 at 9:44 PM

WOW, for a haiku... Benjamin, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT