Empty Rooms

So still without your presence
yet still, your spirit remains 
to remind me how empty
that these rooms can be  
without your presence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Konos Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 5:13 PM
Quite lovely .....thank you
Brown Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 6:11 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting Judy, I look forward to reading your poems.
Allison Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 4:04 PM
I get this feeling every time I go to my parents empty house - oh all those memories flood back - great pen david:-) Hugs jan xx
Brown Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 6:10 PM
Thank you dear Jan, always appreciate your thoughts.
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