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Empty Room Full of Pain

It’s purging my pain in the darkening room of isolation to find myself cutting the hurt out of sight. By injecting the bitterness inside hopeless fields of pain, for which no one can escape! For my mind is numb from the unattainable happiness . So Now I wish to blacken this white innocents that taunts me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/18/2008 5:52:00 PM
Dear Matthew, What a sad poem -very touching. The agonising loneliness causes bitterness and pain. Hope is the antidote. Happiness is highly slippery -difficult to catch. I understand your feelings. Thanks for your generous praise of my poem The Domain of Pain. -Mohammad
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Date: 8/14/2008 7:29:00 PM
so very sad poem full of imagery of the pain that you have endured sometimes casting the pain out helps to alleviate the agony and defeat,,,blessings..Cecil,,and Thank you for reading and leaving your comment.
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