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Empty Room

Cold eyes cast in the ashen colorless room As smoky loneliness revels in an unheard tune Playing in the background of a cruel lurid sentiment Of two truths colliding while two lovers lament Its bitterness is the venom of their love Here alone in the empty gloom Words slash like knives slaughtering silence with hideous doom While this foolish heart listens and cries with its torment Its bitterness is the venom of this love I've held you with arms so empty, so bare Like the flowers at a funeral that wilt in despair I am abandoned and life is loveless and without intent My epitaph will read "My life was surrendered and spent" Here alone in this empty room Its bitterness is the venom of love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/4/2019 7:44:00 PM
Potent penning, here, Lonna. Took a deep breath after reading this one! ~ gw
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 8/5/2019 10:25:00 PM
Thank you Gershon. I like putting myself in many different places............its like poetry!
Date: 7/30/2019 6:06:00 PM
strong poetry that hits the gut...I see you are starting to get a following...well done poet
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 7/31/2019 1:40:00 PM
Sometimes a good gut punch make us real...lol. Thanks for all the great advice Frederick. Lonna
Date: 7/30/2019 8:18:00 AM
I feel the deep emotions within this poem, the pain and loneliness of a loveless relationship. Nicely written, Lonna. John
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 7/31/2019 1:42:00 PM
Thank you John, I am truly a happy and grateful person so writing with this persona has a lot of entertaining value. Always appreciate your responces. Lonna
Date: 7/29/2019 11:04:00 PM
my fav line...words slash like knives slaughtering silence with hideous doom...well written poem Loona.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 8/5/2019 10:26:00 PM
Its more intense than I usually write..........glad you lied it.

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