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Empty Promises

Empty promises which hold on weight Blowing aimlessly in whatever direction the winds chooses Whispering lies and deceiving the most strongest of minds The hollowness entangled within your lies torture the very innocence contained throughout my dreams Shattering every existence of hope Launching them into an abyss of darkness Surrounded by a sea of victims who have suffered a similar fate No greater than my own misguided trust

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/22/2016 11:13:00 PM
JIMMIE, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your awesome words today. ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/6/2011 3:26:00 PM
Creative and interesting write on empty promises, Jimmie
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Date: 7/4/2011 2:49:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site and its many features as I have enjoyed your creative poetry tonight..continue to share words with luv..
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Date: 7/4/2011 8:27:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jimmie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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