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Empty Promises

Empty promises, Tell me what I want to hear But, i'm on defense!!!! .......:JP)..07/19/2009

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James Fraser

Date: 8/27/2009 12:18:00 PM

Nice write Jared>>James

Date: 8/21/2009 5:56:00 PM

Interesting reflection for the reader to think about. The last line was a bit of a surprise--an asset for this piece. Keep on writing! Karen

Brian Strand

Date: 8/20/2009 6:37:00 AM

Well penned Jared.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

Raul Moreno

Date: 8/2/2009 12:43:00 AM

Excellent work, one of my favorite forms. You did a great job with it...Raul

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/19/2009 8:56:00 PM

Pop used to say...you can't ******** your old Man! I tried! believe me! I tried! but he was right!.... if time, my friend, see my poem "requiem to my hero"....I closed his eulogy with this poem of mine... and thanks for your support!....peace brother, your friend, jimbo