Empty Promises

Empty promises,
                      
                     Tell me what I want to hear

But, i'm on defense!!!!


.......:JP)..07/19/2009
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 12:18 PM
Nice write Jared>>James
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August 21, 2009 at 5:56 PM
Interesting reflection for the reader to think about. The last line was a bit of a surprise--an asset for this piece. Keep on writing! Karen
Strand Avatar
August 20, 2009 at 6:37 AM
Well penned Jared.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
Moreno Avatar
August 2, 2009 at 12:43 AM
Excellent work, one of my favorite forms. You did a great job with it...Raul
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July 19, 2009 at 8:56 PM
Pop used to say...you can't ******** your old Man! I tried! believe me! I tried! but he was right!.... if time, my friend, see my poem "requiem to my hero"....I closed his eulogy with this poem of mine... and thanks for your support!....peace brother, your friend, jimbo
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