Empty Nest

From the safety of their NEST, Mama SENT her babies out into the harsh world.

12/11/15
For Silent One's One liners VI - Anagram
Nest/Sent
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Cleverly done Kim... a fascinating one liner! Best wishes, Keith
Makama Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 9:11 AM
This is wonderful and lovely. Nice poetry here dear friend.
Shahein Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 8:45 PM
Beautiful deep words , congratulations on ur win with this great poem, hugs / / :) dalia
Canerdy Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 5:07 PM
Good job, Kim! Janice
Canerdy Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 5:07 PM
Good job, Kim! Janice
Andresen Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 6:39 AM
- Dear Kim, I just want to say - Marry Christmas :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 7:24 PM
Very creative Kim, kind of a metaphor too for when we have to nudge our children to leave home. Lovely!
Tor Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 7:21 AM
Heartfelt Kim.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 8:48 AM
It is a difficult task, I think most intensely felt by a mother.
Andresen Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 1:42 PM
........ out in the big world where anything can happen - Great line, Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Merryman Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 9:58 PM
Thank you, Anne Lise! It's a scary world out there.
A  Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 10:31 PM
KIM, Congrats on your One line Anagram..... SKAT"
Merryman Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 9:57 PM
Thank you, SKAT!
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 9:10 PM
Nicely done Kim! twisting 'round the nest... I hope your babies are doing well. Best wishes, Keith
Merryman Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 9:56 PM
Thank you, Keith! My oldest "baby" will be coming home Dec. 21st after being in Korea for a year.
Haight Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 3:02 PM
Love this one, Kim! Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Merryman Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 9:54 PM
Thank you, Sandra!
Dutta Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 11:26 AM
Congrats Kim to win. Anisha D
Merryman Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 9:54 PM
Thank you, Anisha!
Manassian Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 10:11 AM
oh...yes. This Mama has too. She won't be home for Christmas. So sad....Sending you hugs, dear one.
Merryman Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 9:53 PM
Thank you for your comment, Eileen! I'm sorry your daughter won't be able to be home for Christmas. My eldest son has been in Korea for the past year and will be home on Dec. 21st. His wife and kids are so excited! My husband and I are, too, but his coming home means they will all be moving far away from us soon.
Dietrich Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 9:35 AM
this one is sweet, Kim. Congrats.
Merryman Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 9:47 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Inman Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 9:23 AM
Very nice Kim. Touching, I'm almost there with one of mine, she's 18.
Merryman Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 9:47 PM
Thank you, James! It's hard to let them go, but if we don't, they won't learn to fly.
Negron Flores Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 8:46 AM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Kim.
Merryman Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 9:45 PM
Thank you so much, Nayda!
A. Sharma Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 8:35 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win Kim!
Merryman Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 9:44 PM
Thank your, Upma!
Allison Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 6:25 AM
aww this made me think of my son Kim he's flown the nest - great one line congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Merryman Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 9:44 PM
Thank you, Jan!
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