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Empty Nest

Empty is nest birds have flown west for money's quest we are lonesome. No other sounds Now peace around Hear our own pounds Peace is irksome
+++ December 9, 2014 Form: Rhupunt Dr. Ram Mehta Contest:DESIDERATA by nette onclaud Fourth Place Win First line chosen :"1…” Remember what peace there may be in silence.”

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Date: 12/26/2014 9:08:00 PM
DR RAM, CONGRATULATIONS on your "DESIDERATA," winning poem... always ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/16/2014 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta. Yes, the empty nest leave emptiness.
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Date: 12/16/2014 5:28:00 AM
ohh, I am reminded of parents comin full circle, dr.ram.. so well conveyed.. a pleasure to have you in my contest with my big congrats!
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Date: 12/15/2014 6:47:00 AM
When children are at home we wish for some quiet and peace, but once they go we tend to miss them! Excellent write, Dr. and congrats on a merited win. // paul
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Date: 12/14/2014 7:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dr. Ram. Yes, sometimes the silence is too loud. Really liked your message. Sandra
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Date: 12/14/2014 2:56:00 PM
Sometimes, quiet is too void of life. I see how this would be....well said, Dr. Ram!
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Date: 12/14/2014 2:01:00 PM
congratulations on your win Dr. M
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Date: 12/14/2014 10:54:00 AM
your poem was great, and so is your win. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/14/2014 9:35:00 AM
many congrats Dr Mehta;-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/14/2014 7:40:00 AM
Very nice...and charming...congratulations
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Date: 12/14/2014 4:03:00 AM
Good write and so true. Congrats Ron
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Date: 12/14/2014 2:17:00 AM
And back again with huge congrats on ur winning write!
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Date: 12/14/2014 1:08:00 AM
This is superb,congrats on the win Dr....huggs
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Date: 12/9/2014 11:05:00 PM
oh dr. Ram, I rather enjoyed the empty nest!!! And now I get to have the grandkids over but only until they start to annoy me. hahaha. Good poem.
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Date: 12/9/2014 4:14:00 PM
Yes Dr. Ram, this is something we all have to deal with in our own way, if we have children. Advice, sympothy, never seem to help much. I have tried to transform the leaving into a celebration of passage. After all we aren't really letting go of the young birds, only allowing them to fly.
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Date: 12/9/2014 9:21:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one today..The empty nest is a terrible adjustment for the parents and for the child(only the child usually is not aware of theirs and the parents)..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visits to my p age..Sara
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Date: 12/9/2014 7:48:00 AM
So true so true Dr Ram! Many parents living alone feel the same way u said here in very wonderful words!
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