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Empty Mirror

Empty Mirror

The structure is real
Yet incomplete 
I see no one,  no one at all
Is anyone there?


Empty & Hollow.
Easy to break,
No longer sad. 

Invisible beauty,
Can't feel a thing.
Is anyone there?

Copyright © Poet Destroyer A | Year Posted 2012

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Beautiful Scars Date: 9/20/2016 10:07:00 AM PD, congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 9/20/2014 1:10:00 AM This one is different, I really like it. Login to Reply

James Kelley Date: 12/15/2013 7:05:00 PM Intensely relatable...I wrote something similar to this a long time ago called "the man in the mirror"...I love pieces like this, about struggling with identity or your "place" in the world. This is very powerful, in all it's simplicity...well done Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 12/1/2013 3:45:00 AM Hi, my everdearest sis! I'm so glad I found this very precious gem of yours through this winners list ;) This is an excellent heartfelt write that many of us can relate. A very brilliant & great write indeed. Embracing it tight. To my FAVE. My biggest hearty congratulations on your well-deserved win! Cheers and biggest hugs! My honor for sharing this win w/ U &w/ the others. I didn't expect mine will be included ... idea popped up the last day. Big hugs again! Tcare. God bless! lovem4evrLeo Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/30/2013 9:39:00 PM HOw was your thanksgiving? I had a great time at my son's! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/30/2013 9:39:00 PM PD, you chose a really great entry for the contest. it's good to see these again. I really don't remember this one but I am sure I must have seen it. I bet I've seen all your poems! Congrats on the well deserved win. Login to Reply

Juliet Ligon Date: 11/30/2013 6:27:00 PM Deep. I read this over a few times. Very relatable. Congrats, PD! Login to Reply

Roger Horsch Date: 11/30/2013 10:11:00 AM Nice win Linda, I can't wait to see your next poem.....Roger Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 11/29/2013 4:56:00 AM Congrats on the win, P.D Login to Reply

Robin Davis Date: 11/24/2013 1:39:00 PM Linda This write is emotional and sentimental. Sometimes we all seem invisible and sad and just want to be noticed and not feel lonely anymore. Very deep words. Nice job my friend Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Rumors poem Hugs Login to Reply

Kelly Deschler Date: 9/5/2013 4:51:00 PM I have always had trouble with self identity. How I look on the outside, does not reflect who I am on the inside. I wish my true self was easier to see!...A very deep poem, Linda. I really enjoyed reading it!....You might like my new poem titled, "Dark Angel". It deals with the same subject of self identity. Login to Reply

Laura Breidenthal Date: 2/16/2013 7:38:00 PM Oooooh! I really like this one!!! What cannot be seen is to be written--a very reflective piece. Always, Laura Login to Reply

Gypsyof Essence Date: 2/12/2013 12:25:00 PM I really like this poem, well written. GypsyofEssence Login to Reply

Anna J Carroll Date: 12/12/2012 9:54:00 AM Must be a vampire huh? haha...but very deep meaning,had to read twice to fully understand.Bravo Login to Reply

Carl Fraser Date: 11/25/2012 10:20:00 PM Very deep indeed Pd, how long did you stare? Lol, blessings, Carl Login to Reply

Femi Joey Oloidi Date: 8/14/2012 4:42:00 PM Strong title+strong poem=tough poem. Lol. Nice work. Kingfemi. Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 7/13/2012 6:45:00 PM Hey beautiful Just saying hi. Miss u. Hugs n luv Michael Login to Reply

Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 7/1/2012 8:34:00 AM This is heartfelt all the way...it sort of takes your breath away..like a mini roller coaster ride..lol..enjoyed this one. Login to Reply

Christopher Flaherty Date: 6/22/2012 5:27:00 PM Destroyer Is there truly ever anyone there , I too want no trouble and can not feel a thing, So too do I tell myself, but in life mirrors burn like hell that is the trouble, On the periphery of lifes bubble. Nite nite god bless peace is out there. Login to Reply

Isa Mahrie Date: 5/23/2012 8:24:00 AM Love it PD ... can feel the beat :) Login to Reply

Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 5/10/2012 10:13:00 PM A cool piece, pd! ...has me scratchin' my head, but I like it! Best wishes, Keith Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 5/8/2012 7:47:00 AM unfortunately there isn't a mirror mirror on the wall to tell us we are the fairest of them all when we need it! the sound of silence can be deafening... Login to Reply

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 5/5/2012 7:31:00 PM This is some poem. The invisible beauty only few people can see it. Sometimes we look but we can't see. Thanks for sharing this with us. Lucilla Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 4/30/2012 8:09:00 PM if no one is there... who will answer? Yes someone is there and she is here with us. Hello PD. good to read your poetry this evening and thank you so much for your comments my friend. I do apprecdiate them Login to Reply

Ravindra K Kapoor Date: 4/30/2012 5:35:00 AM I had missed this precious Gem my friend. So deep so lovely and so intriguing a write revealing the often faced reality of life, which often get clear when we stand before the mirror and feel so empty sometimes. The last line ask a lot more than the? mark. Great one from you amazing pen and thank you for your precious words on my series Poem and finding it interesting. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra....Poet .D Login to Reply

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