Empty Inside

I wonder why
I dont cry
Even though i wish to die
Forever stuck in this pit of sorrow	
I wish there was no tomorrow
Just another day thats filled with tears
You where here all those years
Now that your gone
All i want is for you to be here...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 29, 2009 at 12:46 PM
interesting. Reminds me of some of the things i write about. Read some of my poems. (Why?, said by a girl, when i say you) are a few. there are more. Cool write. Autumn
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July 29, 2009 at 11:14 PM
short and powerful. Also loved the truthfulness of this whole write. Enjoy your night.
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July 19, 2009 at 6:32 AM
makes me think of the many people i have lost along the way, great poem, keep up the good work :)
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July 18, 2009 at 11:08 AM
i feel your pain. cehck out some of my poems
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