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Empty Heart

Empty Heart

Fibonacci Style

Heart
feels
empty
Indigo
thoughts of loneliness
perpetual azure sadness
Afflict and torment the conscience of the wicked one
Only the Omniscient One with his love can heal the broken heart of the repentant soul.

Words imposed for contest
1. Perpetual
2. Omniscient
3. Soul
4. Azure
5. Indigo

For Heart Symphony contest
February 15,2016

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/10/2016 11:32:00 PM Anytime....Linda Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/8/2016 3:08:00 PM Congratulations on your win. Linda Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 3/10/2016 4:09:00 PM Thanks Linda

Hansteven Selfa Date: 3/6/2016 2:01:00 AM A must read poem John! You deserve the win! Congratulations! :) -HANS Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 3/10/2016 4:09:00 PM Thanks Hansteven

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/2/2016 11:06:00 AM So true. Congrats on a fine win. Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 3/10/2016 4:09:00 PM Thanks Richard

James Inman Date: 3/2/2016 8:47:00 AM Nicely written John. Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 3/2/2016 8:57:00 AM Thanks James

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 3/1/2016 6:45:00 PM Congratulations on the placement of the contest John Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 3/2/2016 8:56:00 AM Thanks Nayda was a great contest

Jan Allison Date: 2/15/2016 4:28:00 PM Deep emotional write John good luck with the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 2/16/2016 6:39:00 AM Thanks Jan made changes as syllable count was wrong.