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Empty Feelings

How sad that he's forgotten All the lessons love has taught him The money never mattered Her poor heart is torn and shattered It's amazing just to listen To his lacking self rendition I guess when all is said and done Empty feelings are all he's won....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/7/2018 11:12:00 AM
No matter how old some get, they just don't get what matters most. Their loss.
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Date: 7/2/2018 2:53:00 AM
Hi Sharon.. Congrats on being a featured poet this week. This poem is certainly worthy of that recognition. Blessings!
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Date: 11/8/2010 12:47:00 PM
Terrific little rhyme Sharon, nice one >> James :)
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Date: 11/8/2010 12:05:00 PM
Anything and everything was written about this weekend. I am enjoying reading all the wonderful poetry written this past weekend and this morning. Thank you for sharing your writing Shar. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2010 2:43:00 PM
I must agree with the other commenter in that the last line is great!
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