empty bench

An empty bench is never homeless~
               as it shelters golden prints 
               of amethyst heartbeats,
               engraved as souvenirs, 
               for whatever tomorrow's 
               dawn may bestow.
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Smith Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 9:34 PM
mmhmm... i like to sit on a bench and soak of the aura of its memories... who has it listened to? How many times has it comforted a tired traveler? How big is its compassion to allow yet another sleepy blanket-bound rester?
Jones Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 1:27 PM
Lovely congratulations dearest!
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 8:31 AM
So cool. Congratulations!!
Sangster - K Avatar
December 31, 2023 at 6:17 PM
This is truly lovely Ink. Smiles, Anne :-)
Hind Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 6:59 PM
What a way to look at it. Just beautiful.
Greenhough Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 8:08 PM
An endearing verse. Thank you for this new look at benches. They are intriguing.
Sands Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 12:58 PM
Oh , I love this! Thank you for sharing. A Fave for me :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 10:53 AM
Hello Ink Empress, your right a bench is never lonely. Merry Christmas. Also all the best for the New Year. /Darlene/
Poet Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 10:43 AM
Dear Ink, your poem is a deeply introspective and profound piece that evokes profound emotions. The empty bench serves as a symbol of both darkness and light, offering a welcoming space for contemplation to tired travelers. Indeed, this composition evokes a strong emotional response. Your concise language holds significant emotional significance, dear companion. I wish you and your loved ones a joyful Christmas and a prosperous new year.
Pandit Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 6:02 AM
It does harbor goodwill--an invitation to life--an empty bench welcomes! Kudos for reading its mind, Ink.
One Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 3:38 AM
A deep analogy and use of metaphorical language in your verse to express the hollowness you feel, but seem content.. like you are counting your blessings around you, despite certain people not respecting your boundaries.. i guess.. The poem's brevity contributes to its impact, allowing each word to carry weight and significance. The eloquent language and carefully chosen metaphors create a sense of poetic elegance, inviting readers to reflect on the enduring nature of emotional imprints of you.
One Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 3:39 AM
In essence, this poem celebrates the idea that even in stillness and apparent emptiness, there exists a richness of emotion and history, transforming the ordinary into something extraordinary.. The most important thing my poetic friend is not to let your heart turn into wood... keep polishing it.. how else will you shine?
Messina Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 2:58 AM
Soul touching, Indeed, Ink. Few words say a lot here. A very emotional write, dear friend. Merry Christmas to you and your family! Charlie
Sharma  Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 2:22 AM
Wow, this is such a deep and resonating poem, you've conveyed so much emotions within few words.. "An empty bench is never homeless" A very thought-provoking and heartfelt line it is.. That empty bench is never homeless as it shelters those reveries either of darkness or light.. It shelters the reminiscent golden prints of amethyst heartbeats which may weave the scintillating tapestries of tomorrows.. What a marvelous write dear Ink, this is truly soul-touching. Keep writing and shining, wow :)
Onpaper Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 1:40 AM
An empty bench is never homeless…. Truly is … mmm what a start!!! Love everything this piece holds n how it flow… something so empty can home such golden prints of amethyst heartbeat!!! Like how ur heart homes mine!!!! Mmmmm … damn papi u sooo romantic ae!!! I blush!
Rhymes Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 1:15 AM
Awwww I love the first line . An empty bench is never homeless … what a way to start your poem .
Empress Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 1:23 AM
Thank you soo much dahlin always
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