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Empty As the Hourglass Shatters The sand is slowly passing through... the seconds, minutes, hours of time. Now precious grains show less to view, for time is scarce and slowing down to sandy streams that flow sometime... begin, then stop, resume, shutdown. No chance to flip for a new start, for the last grain will sound the chime as shattered hourglass falls apart... along with hearts...at death's 'showtime'. Sandra M. Haight ~2nd Place~ Contest: The Last Sponsor: Silent One Judged: 12/01/2018 ~2nd Place~ Contest: Rhyme Time 4: 10 Lines Sponsor: Laura Loo Rhyme Scheme: A-B-A-C-B-C-D-B-D-B Judged: 06/29/2018

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Date: 12/8/2018 11:47:00 PM
I enjoyed the depth of beauty and emotion in your moving poem, Sandra. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/9/2018 10:11:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Susan, for your visit, congratulations, and supportive, empathetic comments. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/2/2018 5:06:00 PM
Great symbolism here, Sandra: Congrats for a terrific poem. The sands of time do run out. Hugs, SuZ
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/4/2018 8:55:00 PM
Thank you, Suzanne, for your visit and very supportive comments and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/1/2018 11:17:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this deep moving poem, Sandra, congratulations on your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/4/2018 8:54:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eve. I am so pleased you enjoyed it and appreciate your nice comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/1/2018 11:21:00 AM
- Many beautiful and deeply moving poems for this contest ... congratulations on your win, Sandra :) - hugs & happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/2/2018 3:38:00 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/1/2018 11:10:00 AM
A deep and emotive write Sandra.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/2/2018 3:38:00 PM
Thank you for another fine contest, SO, my nice placement, and supportive comments! Much appreciated! Sandra
Date: 6/30/2018 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra, on your great 2nd place win.. Lovely poem ... I hope your home is back to normal after the storm... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/1/2018 4:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/29/2018 9:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Sandra - blessings and best wishes for continued success, my friend! :-)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/1/2018 4:37:00 PM
Thank you very much, Greg! Sandra
Date: 6/29/2018 5:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful heartfelt poem that matches your theme perfectly. Prayers for you and your family. :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/1/2018 4:36:00 PM
Thank you very much, Susan! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/29/2018 6:54:00 AM
so sadly beautiful sweet Sandra, great poem from a wonderful lady :)thank you for your entry and congratulations on your placement. Be blessed, -luloo :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/1/2018 4:36:00 PM
Thank you for the great contest, Laura, and my nice placement. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/16/2018 9:50:00 PM
Great metaphor and imagery, Sandra. I am sorry about your husband's brother.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/1/2018 4:35:00 PM
Thank you very much, Agnes! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/16/2018 7:11:00 PM
Lovely writing and applicable to many others.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/1/2018 4:34:00 PM
Hi, Sunlite! Thank you so much for your visit and supportive comment! Sandra

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