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Empty As the Hourglass Shatters

hand in hand the news sink in as their world collapses and scatters the veil over their head ever so thin they parade largo in a daze hollow eyes clouded by spatters treasuring however many days loud incessant echoing ring of chime undying love to the soul all that matters across the gritty sands of time till empty as the hourglass shatters submitted on June 9, 2018 for contest RHYME TIME 4- 10 LINES sponsored by LAURA LOO - RANKED 2ND

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Eve Roper

Date: 6/30/2018 11:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your great 2nd place win.. Lovely poem Hugs Eve ~`*

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 6/29/2018 9:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win, Line - blessings and best wishes for continued success, my friend! :-)

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/29/2018 10:05:00 PM

Thank you for your appreciated words of support and encouragement, Gregory.

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/29/2018 3:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I picked same theme but you took it a whole different way. So creative! :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/29/2018 5:43:00 PM

Thanks, Susan. I look forward to reading yours.

Lu Loo

Date: 6/29/2018 6:53:00 AM

love the metaphors sweet Line, great poem and love the second to last line. thank you for your entry and congratulations on your placement. Be blessed, -luloo :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/29/2018 9:17:00 AM

Thank you so much, Laura, for this most interesting poetry contest.