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Empty As the Hourglass Shatters

I have gone inner today-  I have fallen deep
so dark and deep to escape the  h o u r g l a s s  of time-
Sun kisses me and wraps me in warmth that I weep,
the sand of life is ticking away-  tick  t i c k  tick 
And in my trance all is so tranquil and sublime
but I feel so  E M P T Y  and trapped behind glass thick.
I  MUST  break free-   and kick until the glass  SHATTERS
for to waste a  m o m e n t  of this life is a crime.
The sands of  time click but living is what MATTERS . . . 
a  b u t t e r f l y  drifts on my rosemary and thyme.

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June 8, 2018


Poetry/Rhyme/Empty as the Hourglass Shatters
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1029-510-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Rhyme 4
sponsor, Laura Loo

First Place 



Theme #1
Rhyme Pattern - ABACBCDBDB
12 syllables per line
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 10:45 AM
Back with a Great Big Congratulations, on your 1st win.. Hugs Eve ~`*
Barden Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 9:32 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Constance - blessings and best wishes for continued success, my friend! :-) <3 (I am so sorry for your loss ... I can't even imagine. I was torn apart when I lost my Cosby eight years ago, but then I got Sugar and Princess, and I love my Sugar even more than I did Cosby - I will be inconsolable when she leaves, and I can't even think about it. I hope peace finds you in time - grief is but the proof of how deeply our love reaches).
Messina Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 11:46 AM
Very beautiful BW, congrats on your #1 win. Never waste a second of life my dear friend...it is too precious! R.I.P. Kitty...Charlie
Gentry Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 8:47 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win with this well-written poem. :)
Scars Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 6:46 AM
wow how beautiful dear sweetness... I adore you and your wonderful poetry, may you find comfort and peace in the loss of your fur-angel. I feel your pain everyday. I pray for you and hope you can rise above and adore another kitty one day. Be blessed, tons of love and hugs, Laura :)
Parker Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 10:28 AM
strong poem on the willingness to live even if one has to fight and struggle... to break the thick glass...good luck, dear poet
Roper Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 7:35 PM
Enjoyed reading this nicely done deep verse, Broken Wings.. Good luck in the contest hugs Eve
La France Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 8:13 AM
Eve, thank you for visiting and for the nice comment ~
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