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I have gone inner today- I have fallen deep so dark and deep to escape the h o u r g l a s s of time- Sun kisses me and wraps me in warmth that I weep, the sand of life is ticking away- tick t i c k tick And in my trance all is so tranquil and sublime but I feel so E M P T Y and trapped behind glass thick. I MUST break free- and kick until the glass SHATTERS for to waste a m o m e n t of this life is a crime. The sands of time click but living is what MATTERS . . . a b u t t e r f l y drifts on my rosemary and thyme. __________________________ June 8, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/Empty as the Hourglass Shatters Copyright Protected, ID 18-1029-510-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Rhyme 4 sponsor, Laura Loo First Place Theme #1 Rhyme Pattern - ABACBCDBDB 12 syllables per line

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Date: 6/30/2018 10:45:00 AM
Back with a Great Big Congratulations, on your 1st win.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 6/29/2018 9:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Constance - blessings and best wishes for continued success, my friend! :-) <3 (I am so sorry for your loss ... I can't even imagine. I was torn apart when I lost my Cosby eight years ago, but then I got Sugar and Princess, and I love my Sugar even more than I did Cosby - I will be inconsolable when she leaves, and I can't even think about it. I hope peace finds you in time - grief is but the proof of how deeply our love reaches).
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Date: 6/29/2018 11:46:00 AM
Very beautiful BW, congrats on your #1 win. Never waste a second of life my dear friend...it is too precious! R.I.P. Kitty...Charlie
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Date: 6/29/2018 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win with this well-written poem. :)
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Date: 6/29/2018 6:46:00 AM
wow how beautiful dear sweetness... I adore you and your wonderful poetry, may you find comfort and peace in the loss of your fur-angel. I feel your pain everyday. I pray for you and hope you can rise above and adore another kitty one day. Be blessed, tons of love and hugs, Laura :)
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Date: 6/9/2018 10:28:00 AM
strong poem on the willingness to live even if one has to fight and struggle... to break the thick glass...good luck, dear poet
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Date: 6/8/2018 7:35:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this nicely done deep verse, Broken Wings.. Good luck in the contest hugs Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 6/9/2018 8:13:00 AM
Eve, thank you for visiting and for the nice comment ~

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