Empty

 I wanted to write about how I felt
Somehow, the paper stayed empty

I couldn't have described it
Any better than that

darkdeepfeelingslifepaini do not know?

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Becca Teagan

November 3, 2016 at 8:46 AM

I like the way you've described that empty feeling, with the image of the blank page - very clever write, though sad. I hope you don't feel empty for long. Hugs

Constance La France

November 3, 2016 at 8:40 AM

Avery, yes sometimes the paper stays empty but the poetic mind is never still always in the background creating, it is more powerful than you imagine, you can use it to take you above all pain ~