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Empty

Nothing is what I feel Empty was my world I painted a picture, but it was blank Blank imaginations, blank feelings Dark and wild place I was in No one, nothing nobody ever heard me Skies were so near, could count the stars The moon tried to smile but blood covered it Anger creped in, frustrations and greed Tried ease the pain but I eased my self Empty and Emptier I felt Bins couldn't be Emptier Gongs couldn't cockles than I was Evil brought the sunshine but felt NOTHING

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Date: 5/21/2016 12:50:00 AM
Nomthandazo Skhosana, it does feel so empty...skat
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Date: 5/19/2016 5:45:00 PM
Such loneliness I feel here Nomthandazo but a tremendous poem. I love the pace and depths...lovely
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Nomthandazo Skhosana
Date: 5/24/2016 5:31:00 AM
thanks i tried my best!

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