Empty

Empty
silent darkness
Kiss’s you lightly
Emotionless moment to grieve
alone

depressiongrieflostcinquain

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Frank Polgar

December 28, 2014 at 9:45 PM

A sad topic, but I like your poem.

Jan Allison

December 16, 2014 at 11:24 AM

so deep and sad:-( hugs jan xx

Cynthia Ferguson

December 16, 2014 at 12:03 PM

thank you Jan, I will try and do a happy one soon, :)

Brenda Meier-Hans

December 16, 2014 at 10:26 AM

Sounds very emotional Cynthia. I wish you a blessed Christmas.

Cynthia Ferguson

December 16, 2014 at 11:56 AM

thank you, your always so kind Brenda, merry Christmas to you also,

Dorian Petersen Potter

December 16, 2014 at 7:03 AM

Beautiful pen Cynthia! truly enjoyed your sad tanka and believ me I can relate to it too today the most, dear friend. A 7 for you! That makes two of us feeling very empty today. I feel so drained of everything. Wish you a very Merry Christmas! And I wish you feel better too very soon!:) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Cynthia Ferguson

December 16, 2014 at 9:05 AM

I am learning poets seem to carry a lot, things always get heavy, and you see to much sometimes, and to balance it out is always a task, merry Christmas, and thank you

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