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Empty

I've never felt this before, Now I've no idea what's in store. This missing part of me, It wants me to scream. Pressure builds, everything seems to still. I cant take it anymore! I bend, break, empty. Night begins, I feel suffocated. Last night I finally screamed. I bend, break, emptied. I slice the delicate flesh, that had taunted me. The missing part of me, I geuss will always be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/24/2011 8:26:00 AM
Not really my cup of tea, interesting repitition "I bend, I break", typo on last line
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