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Empty

Dying from exhaustion, pain, anguish, hype, anxiety, depression, death and more searching for one word. giving it up to all slowly, the breath takes no more and there you see a corpse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/26/2010 5:16:00 PM
sad dying state...well written!
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Date: 9/26/2010 5:13:00 PM
Such a void at the end! Deep one, Jenny
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Date: 9/26/2010 5:07:00 PM
Very awesome write on Empty, Jenny
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Date: 9/26/2010 3:40:00 PM
Tragic ending to an overworked soul, interesting read.
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Date: 9/26/2010 2:27:00 PM
wow, deep write, enjoyed the read...P.D.
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