Empty

Dying from exhaustion, pain, anguish,
hype, anxiety, depression,
death and more
searching for one word.
giving it up
to all
slowly, the breath takes no more
and there you see a corpse.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 5:16 PM
sad dying state...well written!
Dietrich Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 5:13 PM
Such a void at the end! Deep one, Jenny
Mehta Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 5:07 PM
Very awesome write on Empty, Jenny
Nutter Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 3:40 PM
Tragic ending to an overworked soul, interesting read.
A   Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 2:27 PM
wow, deep write, enjoyed the read...P.D.
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