Empty

i cat explain it
this feeling of hurt inside
is to much to bare
as if someone or somthing
was taken away from me

depressionlifelost lovetanka

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Charmaine Chircop

December 2, 2009 at 8:17 AM

i can relate to that hollow feeling echoing in your soul..you will survive it all--Char,ma

Michael Jordan

November 24, 2009 at 6:14 PM

Hi Bree - Thanks for the comments - I can relate to this poem - for many years I made choices that cost me the ones that I loved the most - People closest to me have betrayed me in the past - it all just came with the life I had chosen for myself - These days all that seems like a distant dream to me - Loved your poem hon - mj

Logan Saucillo

November 24, 2009 at 12:36 PM

the hole inside is the pain that hurts the most. read my take on this very thought, "buried at sea." i just wrote it today! you must've been reading my mind.