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Empty


I stood with you at your grave,
watching the rain erase your name from the stone.
Your damp face scanned the sky for a trace of your days
as the mournful ghosts huddled round,
sobbing into their shawls of fog.  You laid
a handful of thorns on the mound where the grass grew black.
Your eyes were empty of anger.  Your eyes were empty
of expectation.  Your eyes were empty of fulfillment.



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Please note that I never have used and never will use AI to compose or revise any of my writings.

A random comment on poetry in general:  

That which we cannot speak of, we must sing.
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