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Everything began so fast, All I felt was a sudden collapse, A deteriorated mood, a massive elapse. Piece by piece it fell apart, Remembering still it's just the start, Then suddenly I lose all my heart. My hunger has left me but it's still there, The hunger for pain, and to make it all fair, To whom I hurt, I don't even care. I just want it back, the life I owned, Make these demons leave me alone, I'll take it back and set my tone. For now no sleep is my sentence, Revenge for trauma is my penance, Emptiness becomes omnipresence.

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Date: 2/18/2009 10:04:00 PM
Good write Brandon. I know this feeling all too well. Keep up the writing and welcome to PoetrySoup.
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Date: 2/18/2009 7:56:00 PM
Of your work you've put on here. . . this one truly stands out. Well done.
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