Empty

I feel empty
unsuccessful
unfulfilled
I feel sad
I can't do anything right
but maybe something 
will come along
to fill me up 
with happiness
but until that day 
I feel empty
unsuccessful
unfulfilled
empty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Jordan Avatar
August 9, 2008 at 7:19 AM
Olivia - Boy can I relate to this poem - I have one posted called "Empty Straws" that I think you may enjoy if you wish - I hope you find something positive to make you feel complete - God Bless
Burton Avatar
August 8, 2008 at 10:07 PM
I guess sometimes we must give ourselfs a little push.Along with prayer.Ilike your poem we it was real and reality based.Its okay to release stress as well as joy.that is the joy of poetry.BE COOL
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