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Emptiness

Treading on her long road of despair. She was forced to stumble in dark emptiness, gloom he did share. Spirits that once were rambunctious, are now broken in black dirt. Amidst the ugly Strom, she met Hovering doom and surreal hurt. While lost in the swirling abyss, she feel truly dammed. Her heart screaming in panic mode, her soul in a crooked jam. Black fumes of pity flowed oddly through her ragging gut. Shaken as she is deeply pulled down into dying old rut.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/16/2013 8:30:00 AM
- Beautiful written, but a little sad Belinda! - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Belinda Morgan
Date: 3/24/2013 6:08:00 PM
Hey, thanks for your reply I do appreciate it!!! Yeah I like to write about sad experiences(smile) belinda

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