Emptiness

Treading on her long road of 
despair.
She was forced to stumble in 
dark emptiness, gloom he did 
share.
Spirits that once were 
rambunctious, are now broken 
in black dirt.
Amidst the ugly Strom, she met 
Hovering doom and surreal hurt.

While lost in the swirling abyss, 
she feel truly dammed.
Her heart screaming in panic 
mode, her soul in a crooked jam.
Black fumes of pity flowed oddly 
through her ragging gut.
Shaken as she is deeply pulled 
down into dying old rut.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Andresen Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 8:30 AM
- Beautiful written, but a little sad Belinda! - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Morgan Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 6:08 PM
Hey, thanks for your reply I do appreciate it!!! Yeah I like to write about sad experiences(smile) belinda
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