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Emptiness

Loving marriage, Bitter divorce - Spiralling down descending course To cold and tight from fond and keen, Emptiness, heavy, in between. February 10,

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Daniel Turner

Date: 3/7/2023 9:22:00 AM

Life is too short. Happiness is the antidote. Very sad, Maggie.

Constance La France

Date: 2/21/2023 9:57:00 AM

Margarita, nice poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - E Words, well done, blessings, Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/16/2023 7:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a write/story. Life makes us stronger. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/16/2023 3:49:00 PM

Thank you Paula.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/15/2023 10:59:00 AM

- Sounds very empty and sad, Margarita ... great writing :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) -

Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/15/2023 4:24:00 PM

Thank you. Makes us stronger:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/14/2023 12:34:00 PM

wow, I really like how you di yours. I think you and I are the only ones to have done this theme. Congrats

Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/15/2023 4:24:00 PM

We both must have felt it in whatever ways it may fill in our lives.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/13/2023 12:48:00 AM

Short and pithy, Margarita:)

Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/13/2023 4:32:00 AM

Wish I never knew firsthand…but what doesn’t kill us… :)