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Margarita Lillico

Emptiness

Loving marriage,
Bitter divorce -
Spiralling down descending course 
To cold and tight from fond and keen,
Emptiness, heavy, in between. 

February 10,

Copyright © Margarita Lillico | Year Posted 2023

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March 7, 2023 at 9:22 AM

Life is too short. Happiness is the antidote. Very sad, Maggie.

Constance La France

February 21, 2023 at 9:57 AM

Margarita, nice poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - E Words, well done, blessings, Constance

Paula Goldsmith

February 16, 2023 at 7:49 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a write/story. Life makes us stronger. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Margarita Lillico

February 16, 2023 at 3:49 PM

Thank you Paula.

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 15, 2023 at 10:59 AM

- Sounds very empty and sad, Margarita ... great writing :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) -

Margarita Lillico

February 15, 2023 at 4:24 PM

Thank you. Makes us stronger:)

Andrea Dietrich

February 14, 2023 at 12:34 PM

wow, I really like how you di yours. I think you and I are the only ones to have done this theme. Congrats

Margarita Lillico

February 15, 2023 at 4:24 PM

We both must have felt it in whatever ways it may fill in our lives.

February 13, 2023 at 12:48 AM

Short and pithy, Margarita:)

Margarita Lillico

February 13, 2023 at 4:32 AM

Wish I never knew firsthand…but what doesn’t kill us… :)

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