Empress of Stars, Tableau

She's a citrine pearl
empress of patience
sprinkling lilac stars
and rosemary balm
upon silver scars
above moon-kissed seas



Tableau written for picture 3
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bordner Avatar
June 23, 2026 at 10:22 AM
A Pearl patiently glowing with an effloessence of creamy pulsing, She is perfect in her age of love, desire and time waking in Her palm, gentle as breath slow warm...J.A.B.
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 10:17 AM
Here is a tiny poem I never even saw before and I just love it. I wonder if you got a win with it. It's a winner with me and a fave
Kauffman Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 11:20 AM
What amazing images, Inky! "Citrine pearl," "lilac stars," "rosemary balm," "silver scars." Truly the moon is patient slowly gracing the night like royalty! Your word pictures are elegant, rich in uniqueness and effortlessly flow from one line to the next. Like this elegant moon, thank you for gracing PS with your poetic talent! So wonderful to share the podium with you! Blessings!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 6:08 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win! Your images are stunning! Love ~ Mala
Andresen Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 2:52 AM
- Back with a well deserved congratulations, Ink :) - hugs
Miller Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 1:52 AM
Lovely poem; congratulations
Merryman Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 3:34 PM
Stunning imagery, Ink Empress! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 10:46 AM
Filled with mind boggling imagery! Congratulations, IE!
Sharma  Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 8:58 AM
Heartiest congratulations to you my dear Ink, on the magical win! You definitely deserved it and I'm so euphoric for you.. How elegant and splendid is this piece.. "She's s citrine peal" What a marvelous imagery and subtle metaphorical dialects here.. "Sprinkling lilac stars" Ahh, sprinkle some on my heart too, please! "Above moon-kissed seas" If the word 'ethereal' is defined in a unique way, I will give it the name of your poetries!
May Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 8:15 AM
Lovely write Empress, Congrats on your win
Empress Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 8:51 AM
Oh my gosh! I am over the moon! Truly literally so grateful and beyond honored. My first ever true win on soup i am so happy thank you so much for the inspiration
Daniel Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 9:33 PM
Such lovely description, IE, great images spring to mind, beautiful:)
Lindley Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 11:46 AM
A beautiful very short piece but an image feast. "upon silver stars and moon-kissed seas" Yes, this made me wish it was about 200 verses my friend. A fav.. God bless.
Lindley Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 11:46 AM
A beautiful very short piece but an image feast. "upon silver stars and moon-kissed seas" Yes, this made me wish it was about 200 verses my friend. A fav.. God bless.
Sands Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 7:21 AM
Beautiful poem. I enjoyed :)
Seeker Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 1:53 AM
Picturesque and Brilliant!
Pandit Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 2:02 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. Silent speaks highly of you- I can see why as I read your poems. Beautiful description-- a lovely poem. I thought I posted a comment earlier.
Empress Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 1:00 AM
Ah thank you so much i appreciate your support truly
Richards Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 1:09 PM
It is inviting tableau you have painted, Ink. Enjoyed it. Welcome to Soup. Regards, Suzette
Empress Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 12:59 AM
Thank you so much Suzette appreciate your support
Puddifoot Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 1:08 PM
very pretty use of language in this short piece..welcome to the site :)
Empress Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 12:59 AM
Awwn thank you so much
Andresen Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 11:20 AM
- Woow ... really beautiful, Ink ... an excellent choice of words - Best wishes in that contest ... a top winning poem in my eyes :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 12:59 AM
Awwn thank you so much, i dont think i am following all the contest rules ?? newbie here learning still ??
George   Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 5:07 AM
You have created such a visual of color and motion in my mind with this beautiful verse.
Empress Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 12:57 AM
Thank you so very much i appreciate your support
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