Eve Roper Poet Free verse

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Empowering Growth

sun burst through exploring the early soft warm day
emerging its stunning crown from behind the stage
moving slowly on the river's narrow runway
mid my feet with poetic fine-spun dreams in tow
evolving a rough diamond brilliance within me

8/22/2021

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David Smith August 25, 2021 at 2:13 PM Nothing finer than drops of sunshine sparkling water like wine and a picnic on the bank under shade of a willow. You seem to give the right poems at the right time. Hope you are good for a few more. David in NZ

Demetrios Trifiatis August 24, 2021 at 4:30 AM Wondrous poem with a stunning photo, dearest, Eve! Hugs xxx

Gershon Wolf August 23, 2021 at 8:10 PM Interesting angles on the sun here... As for me, I'm ok with the sun empowering growth,... until about 10:15 a.m. in the summer, when it just 'overpowers' growth. ~ Fading Fast

Sotto Poet August 23, 2021 at 8:27 AM What a lovely analogy!! Eve, you've done an amazing job:) Eve Roper August 23, 2021 at 7:50 PM Thank you, Lasaad.

Heidi Sands August 23, 2021 at 7:13 AM This is so beautifully written Eve! :) Eve Roper August 23, 2021 at 8:12 AM Thank you , Heidi,, Hugs

Supraja Kannan August 23, 2021 at 12:10 AM Evolving a rough diamond brillance within me... What a beautiful metaphor!!! So beautifully done, Eve... Eve Roper August 23, 2021 at 8:12 AM Thank you, Supraja...you inspire me ... Hugs

Victor Buhagiar August 22, 2021 at 10:28 PM Outstanding and brilliant. So poetic. Eve Roper August 23, 2021 at 8:11 AM Thank you my friend

Mystic Rose Rose August 22, 2021 at 9:27 PM You are a rough diamond my friend, but one that was exquisitely made from the start. Shine on girl, shine on, ! Eve Roper August 23, 2021 at 8:11 AM Thank you sweet lady sisters in spirit... Love and Hugs