Empirical

Rare forms blare 
into the empirical hot sun.

Each traced in fire,
each outlined by the crystal 
shimmer of the son.

Haloed in glamour
A play of color.

Of One.

Layers of imagery in rare forms
Dare to stare, brilliant! 

Into the heliosphere 
crystalline forms 
of pure white energy, 
rare oblique symmetry. 
Flare! 

Infernal waves of Thermal…
Radiates, detonates, 
compress the empirical sum!

White light oppresses… 

The haloed sun stretches, its flares tracing 
a burning thermal holocaust!
 
…objects blaze here and there listening! 

To the aftermath, as the sun 
sets into nightmare…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kaur Avatar
January 11, 2023 at 7:05 PM
hot sun...shimmer of the son...of One...the empirical sum-- What a perfect play of words! The sun sets into nightmare... I would say the words 'dare to stare, brilliant'! Enjoyed your poem thoroughly.
Tellaferro Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 2:06 PM
Thanks, I appreciate the kind words, feel free to read more. I will be checking your workout as soon as I can! Thanks again!
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