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Empirical

Rare forms blare into the empirical hot sun. Each traced in fire, each outlined by the crystal shimmer of the son. Haloed in glamour A play of color. Of One. Layers of imagery in rare forms Dare to stare, brilliant! Into the heliosphere crystalline forms of pure white energy, rare oblique symmetry. Flare! Infernal waves of Thermal… Radiates, detonates, compress the empirical sum! White light oppresses… The haloed sun stretches, its flares tracing a burning thermal holocaust! …objects blaze here and there listening! To the aftermath, as the sun sets into nightmare…

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Date: 1/11/2023 7:05:00 PM
hot sun...shimmer of the son...of One...the empirical sum-- What a perfect play of words! The sun sets into nightmare... I would say the words 'dare to stare, brilliant'! Enjoyed your poem thoroughly.
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Poet Tellaferro
Date: 1/12/2023 2:06:00 PM
Thanks, I appreciate the kind words, feel free to read more. I will be checking your workout as soon as I can! Thanks again!

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