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Idle banter, moments of joy, far distanced from ego spawned ploy ~ behold how heart's bliss beats canter; moments of joy, idle banter. Mindful souls feel tremors subtle but are careful not to scuttle the pretence, camouflaged as zeal. Tremors subtle, mindful souls feel. Tender embrace, our heart's emote for love expands, in Gods bliss boat, healing gently by divine grace ~ our heart's emote, tender embrace. 07-November-2022 Swap Quatrain

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Date: 11/7/2022 1:00:00 AM
You are becoming quite an expert with this swap quatrain. So well done.
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Date: 11/7/2022 7:19:00 AM
Great form isn’t it? Emile introduced me to it by sponsoring a contest

Book: Shattered Sighs