Notes About The Poem

Empathy

Idle banter, moments of joy,
far distanced from ego spawned ploy ~
behold how heart's bliss beats canter;
moments of joy, idle banter.

Mindful souls feel tremors subtle
but are careful not to scuttle
the pretence, camouflaged as zeal.
Tremors subtle, mindful souls feel.

Tender embrace, our heart's emote
for love expands, in Gods bliss boat,
healing gently by divine grace ~
our heart's emote, tender embrace.

07-November-2022

Swap Quatrain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Buhagiar Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 1:00 AM
You are becoming quite an expert with this swap quatrain. So well done.
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November 7, 2022 at 7:19 AM
Great form isn’t it? Emile introduced me to it by sponsoring a contest
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