Empathy

feeling what you are feeling ~ wanting to make it all better for you
SECOND PLACE WINNER Written September 28, 2022 submitted to "Empathy" Poetry Contest sponsored by JCB Brul
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Anaya Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 7:38 PM
Congratulations on you win! So many good ones~
Hankins Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 8:42 PM
There were, indeed, my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 1:19 PM
Love that sentiment, Milt. Congrats here
Hankins Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 1:33 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I'm afraid I simply wasn't as poetic as you were, but, essentially we said the same thing.
Gorelick Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 12:08 PM
Congrats on your win! Robert
Hankins Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 1:33 PM
Thank you, Robert. Appreciate your congrats.
Andresen Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 11:44 AM
- A great line written about empathy - ... congratulations on your win :) -
Hankins Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 1:34 PM
Thank you so much, Sunshine. I appreciate your thought.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 5:56 AM
Congratulations!
Hankins Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 1:34 PM
Thank you so much, Kim. I appreciate it.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 10:01 AM
This is a feeling I wish everyone nurtured.
Hankins Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 11:17 AM
Me, too. Me, too!
Anaya Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 8:35 AM
Reminds me of the Love is...poems :) Love & empathy what a bittersweet union! GL~Anaya
Hankins Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 11:17 AM
Thanks, Anaya. Yes, I hadn't thought of that, but it does.
Tor Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 5:24 PM
Like this one a lot Milton. Deep thought expressed here and great words to convey. When we think of empathy it is about the other person your feelings are for but in all reality it is about making it all better for you. Excellent point. You have to read it twice to really grasp this realization but when you do your amazed at its cleverness in creation. Congratulations for this unique thought written by you. A favorite...
Hankins Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 7:59 PM
I can't think of any better way to express it. I've read a few of the other submissions, but I do like mine.
Tor Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 5:25 PM
ps do not be surprised this placing very high in the contest...
Gorelick Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 4:49 PM
Right to the core. Good luck in the contest! Robert
Hankins Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 8:00 PM
Thanks, Robert. I couldn't come up with anything better, I thought.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 3:22 PM
The essence of empathy is comforting.
Hankins Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 8:01 PM
It is, indeed. Comforting another person is truly "the essence of empathy." Well put, Kim.
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