Russell Sivey Poet Terzanelle

Emotive Feelings

The night comes upon us swiftly with peace
Lanterns are lit outside above the streets
Light seems to be reflected, every piece

There’s a rhythm of the night, some great beats
And I intensely hear the perfect sounds
Lanterns are lit outside above the streets

There are surely sulfur smells which abounds
Nothing compares to the real sight of light
And I intensely hear the perfect sounds

These emotive feelings are felt at night
A wonderful sight of light reflecting
Nothing compares to the real sight of light

The light bouncing around is infecting
Candles are in the windows to invite
A wonderful sight of light reflecting

Evening is lit up with lots of delight
The night comes upon us swiftly with peace
Candles are in the windows to invite
Light seems to be reflected, every piece

Russell Sivey

Contest: anything goes
Sponsor: Kim Morrison

6/10/2013

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Debbie Guzzi June 16, 2013 at 4:34 AM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Kim Morrison June 13, 2013 at 5:15 PM I love your work Russell! In my humble opinion this one is very well crafted. Congrats! Kim

Richard Lamoureux June 10, 2013 at 7:59 PM I am very fond of this form and you have done an excellent job. Simply a lovely piece.

Nette Onclaud June 10, 2013 at 9:43 AM such a delicate write, rusell... i can feel the soothing mood of this piece with lights aglow... and images, rhyme scheme that simply ignite the senses.. wonderful job!.. thnaks for your las visit on my page.... the rhyme pattern is 10/8/10/6... :) huggs! Nette Onclaud June 10, 2013 at 9:45 AM ' thanks for your last visit'

Demetrios Trifiatis June 10, 2013 at 6:56 AM Serenity fills the night as the light is reflected upon our souls! Wonderful and peaceful poem, certainly a candidate for a winner! 7! Good luck!

Shadow Hamilton June 10, 2013 at 4:09 AM lovely Russell gl in contest Shadow x

Timothy Hicks June 10, 2013 at 12:44 AM Curious to know more about those "sulfur smells". When I was little and my family took a trip to Yellowstone, those geysers were practically exploding with the smell of sulfur (which to me smelled exactly like rotten eggs). I like the feelings you emit from the night... most think it's a scary time where nothing but bad stuff happens... truth be told it's really quite peaceful. Enjoyed your poem.

Mustapha Mohammed June 9, 2013 at 11:59 PM Lovely stuff from you Russell.Enjoyable read indeed.