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raindrops falling like crystal tears carrying with them my loneliness and fears when they dry will this heart be healed or will my emotions have to yield to what I now must do, alas without you I see your face pictured in my mind your smile a treasure sweet as wine. raindrops falling like crystal tears carrying with them my loneliness and fears when they dry will this heart be healed or will my emotions have to yield to what I now must do, alas without you I see your face pictured in my mind your smile a treasure sweet as wine.

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Date: 7/11/2009 3:27:00 PM
I like your descriptiveness in this piece. Sara
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Date: 7/11/2009 2:05:00 PM
Thank you, I think that is my favorite line. I will definitely check out your works.
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Date: 7/11/2009 1:41:00 PM
" your smile a treasure sweet as wine" i like that. check out some of my poems
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