Emotions Untamed

raindrops falling like crystal tears
carrying with them my loneliness and fears
when they dry will this heart be healed
or will my emotions have to yield
to what I now must do, alas without you
I see your face pictured in my mind
your smile a treasure sweet as wine.
raindrops falling like crystal tears
carrying with them my loneliness and fears
when they dry will this heart be healed
or will my emotions have to yield
to what I now must do, alas without you
I see your face pictured in my mind
your smile a treasure sweet as wine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 3:27 PM
I like your descriptiveness in this piece. Sara
Brown Badr Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 2:05 PM
Thank you, I think that is my favorite line. I will definitely check out your works.
Meadows Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 1:41 PM
" your smile a treasure sweet as wine" i like that. check out some of my poems
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