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Emotional Whirlwind

Whirlwind 

eclipse of emotions
shadow her descent

                      Falling 

like a deflated balloon
against the masons hand

                                    Crushed
Love escapes her callused grasp

Lay

lost lovefree verse

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Robert A. Dufresne

March 13, 2012 at 1:08 PM

I really like the tools you have used to bring about your message, Walayee. A write that brings the reader down with the writer falling and sharing a bruised history of love and it's escape through constant attempts ergo a callused grasp but not necessarily a callused heart ...At least that's my take on it. Well done! your talent shines through