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10th in 1403 Contest (Sponsor: Brian Strand)

Judged: August 14th, 2025

 

Emotional Voids

hearts of glass hurled through air in pieces plastic idols nesting dolls caned by fear opaque tears swept beneath smiling lacquer
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Velasco Avatar
August 11, 2025 at 2:04 AM
Such powerful, sharp images in so few words. The contrast between fragility and fear really hits deep. Thanks for sharing this intense piece!
Layne Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 6:14 AM
Your words are appreciated.
Bell Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 9:25 AM
Nine lines that speak volumes. I suppose the good thing is, after a while you don't give a shit whilst you get stronger.
Layne Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 6:13 AM
Thanks, Paul. What doesn't kill you ...
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