Beautiful Scars Poet Free verse

Emotional Unsayable

Emotional instability remains a character defect.
            In all moments, I stand alone in remorse, 
giving nothing the reasons of why I am alone- 
                   I fear all things that bring obscure thoughts. 
     When the night falls to the shadows of dusk, 
when the darkness flows through my veins, 
                       I shan’t see what is right in front of me…my happiness. 



Unsayable Contest
Nette Onclaud
November 25, 2017

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Susan Ashley December 1, 2017 at 2:21 PM Laura, returning with congratulations on your win with your deeply emotional write. Warmest regards ~Susan

Eve Roper November 30, 2017 at 5:51 PM Laura, ..Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*

Andrea Dietrich November 25, 2017 at 7:32 PM Oh wow that last line really hits it home, Laura. I am kind of the opposite of you, feeling very grounded in life, but I sure can appreciate how this kind of feeling contributes to the amazing poetry you are able to express. Beautiful Scars November 26, 2017 at 1:10 PM aww thank you sweet Andrea, I always adore you and your kind comments :)

Susan Ashley November 25, 2017 at 12:58 PM Laura, such a deeply emotional and intimate write. Happiness can be elusive if not invisible in dark times. Beautifully expressed. Good luck in the contest! Beautiful Scars November 26, 2017 at 1:10 PM thank you dear Susan :)

Line Gauthier November 25, 2017 at 12:29 PM Beautifully intense poem, Laura Beautiful Scars November 26, 2017 at 1:10 PM thank you sweet Line :)