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Emotional Unsayable

Emotional instability remains a character defect. In all moments, I stand alone in remorse, giving nothing the reasons of why I am alone- I fear all things that bring obscure thoughts. When the night falls to the shadows of dusk, when the darkness flows through my veins, I shan’t see what is right in front of me…my happiness. Unsayable Contest Nette Onclaud November 25, 2017

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Date: 12/1/2017 2:21:00 PM
Laura, returning with congratulations on your win with your deeply emotional write. Warmest regards ~Susan
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Date: 11/30/2017 5:51:00 PM
Laura, ..Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/25/2017 7:32:00 PM
Oh wow that last line really hits it home, Laura. I am kind of the opposite of you, feeling very grounded in life, but I sure can appreciate how this kind of feeling contributes to the amazing poetry you are able to express.
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Date: 11/26/2017 1:10:00 PM
aww thank you sweet Andrea, I always adore you and your kind comments :)
Date: 11/25/2017 12:58:00 PM
Laura, such a deeply emotional and intimate write. Happiness can be elusive if not invisible in dark times. Beautifully expressed. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 11/26/2017 1:10:00 PM
thank you dear Susan :)
Date: 11/25/2017 12:29:00 PM
Beautifully intense poem, Laura
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/26/2017 1:10:00 PM
thank you sweet Line :)

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