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Great strength lies in emotions that bind even in those we'd rather leave behind. We cannot break free from what we feel yoked by sentiments that once were real. By fate, destiny, or through circumstance, there is no release from love's eternal dance. By stepping on toes, battle lines are drawn verbal weapons used in a marital marathon. No cries for mercy will ever set us free tethered by chains in arrested custody. A steep price we pay for falling in love the blood spilled from a wounded dove. Memory ropes tied in knots hold fast for millenniums of time they will last salted cheeks from rivers of tears wept fallen leaves in hearts cannot be swept. We can hold a key that opens a lock, stop the hands from moving on a clock, but try as we might, we will never find freedom from emotional ties that bind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/20/2017 6:44:00 PM
Life is a cruel teacher. This is great Lin. Congratulations on the win. I wish I had your words so I could say how much I liked this.
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Date: 8/20/2017 6:53:00 PM
My words are 'thank you,' Dean. Seriously, I'm happy to know you like this one so I humbly thank you.
Date: 8/20/2017 2:43:00 AM
It's wonderful, Lin, and how true. Congrats for win.
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Date: 8/20/2017 6:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Subimal.
Date: 1/15/2016 8:07:00 PM
I love this one Lin. the rhyming is perfect and that is what I like so well written, hope you are well, take care...........Vera
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Date: 1/19/2016 1:24:00 PM
Thanks, Vera. I'm quite well and just back from visiting my grandson in Florida.
Date: 1/15/2016 5:53:00 AM
well written words, perfectly placed rhyme, an excellent work Lin...
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Date: 1/19/2016 1:24:00 PM
thank you.. sorry this is late, but I've been out of town.

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