Roy Pett Poet Rhyme

Emotional Baggage

Through my naive eyes you were beautiful 
could not believe they called you a savage
my heart would not allow any bad thoughts
no ones perfect, we all carry baggage,

we will prove them wrong, love will conquer all,
denying us love has no advantage,
we have so much, future in our favor 
no ones perfect, we all carry baggage,

we are strong we'll cope with any heartbreak
promises made surly contain adage,
you did do bad things that now you regret 
no ones perfect, we all carry baggage,

they may not forgive your woeful actions
some lives have changed, you didn't mean to damage,
they still can't forget, even now you're gone
no ones perfect, now I carry baggage.

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Line Gauthier September 18, 2018 at 7:53 PM I loved your poem, Roy. Superbly penned. Roy Pett September 19, 2018 at 5:17 AM Thank you so much Line, receiving your very kind comment has lifted my mood which is quite low this morning, so pleased you like this, thanks again for your support my dear friend. :))

Darlene De Beaulieu October 1, 2017 at 1:48 PM Baggage, my dead husband carried baggage I was wife number 3, so he would talk about wife number 1 or 2 often. It came to a point I turned him off. I got tired of hearing ofthe wives he had in the past. Have a nice day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu October 13, 2017 at 1:34 PM You to my friend. Roy Pett October 2, 2017 at 4:40 AM Thanks for your visit Darlene, seems your husband didn't know when he had a good thing, I can feel your love and compassion through your lovely poems and comments on others, You have a good day my friend. :))

Darren White September 27, 2017 at 5:25 AM We do, don't we Roy, we all carry baggage... Roy Pett September 27, 2017 at 6:36 AM Thank you very much Darren, we do, I agree with the quote:- a man that doesn't make a mistake makes nothing, but us humans we are ready to judge and sometimes find it hard to forgive and forget, thanks again for your support. :)))

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2017 at 12:54 AM Roy, this is somewhat like a kyrielle where the last line is always the same but I love how you changed it on the last verse! Good one. Roy Pett September 27, 2017 at 6:12 AM Thank you so much Andrea, there seems to be many variations of poetry forms so perhaps with poetic licence I could say this is a Kyrielle ? Thanks again for your support and encouragement. :)))

Joseph May September 26, 2017 at 2:04 PM True words Roy...and a great refrain..Very nicely penned Roy Pett September 26, 2017 at 3:33 PM Thank you very much for your very kind comment Joseph your support is really appreciated. :))

Susan Ashley September 25, 2017 at 8:18 PM Wow Roy, a strong emotional write with a lovely refrain and an amazing and sad twist at the end that just made me stop for a few seconds after reading your poem... to let it soak in. A truly heartfelt and heart-rendering write. Enjoyed! :) Roy Pett September 26, 2017 at 6:12 AM Thank you so much Susan, your comments I really welcome and very much appreciate, whether right or wrong I just write what comes into my head, I don't edit much only check spelling and syllable count if needed, I would also like to say that I am hopefully learning a lot from reading poems composed by the amazing poets on PS such as yourself, thanks again for your support and encouragement. :))

Probir Gupta September 24, 2017 at 11:07 PM The refrain is enjoyably interesting ... very truly said ... we all carry this baggage ... Roy Pett September 25, 2017 at 3:21 AM Thank you very much Probir for your very kind comment, so pleased you liked this your support is much appreciated. :))

Vijay Pandit September 24, 2017 at 1:40 PM I like the sound of one line repeating in the stanzas--an emotional write! Roy Pett September 24, 2017 at 1:52 PM Thank you very much Vijay for your very kind comment, I quite like the repetition. Thanks again for your support. :))