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Emotional Baggage

Heaviness felt over the shoulders As a sac of bricks that drags you To the deepness of a calm lake Drowning to undiscovered emotions 6-16-2016

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Date: 6/17/2016 3:39:00 AM
'Drowning to undiscovered emotions' is very powerful.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 6/17/2016 6:10:00 AM
Thank you Kai
Date: 6/16/2016 3:05:00 PM
Oh deep and sad - wonderful imagery Nayda - guess many can relate to the emotional baggage wearing us down:-( hugs Jan xx
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 6/16/2016 3:23:00 PM
Thank you Jan

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