Emotional Baggage

Heaviness felt over the shoulders
As a sac of bricks that drags you
To the deepness of a calm lake
Drowning to undiscovered emotions













6-16-2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Neumann Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 3:39 AM
'Drowning to undiscovered emotions' is very powerful.
Negron Flores Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 6:10 AM
Thank you Kai
Allison Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 3:05 PM
Oh deep and sad - wonderful imagery Nayda - guess many can relate to the emotional baggage wearing us down:-( hugs Jan xx
Negron Flores Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 3:23 PM
Thank you Jan
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