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Emotional Abendrot

Is it possible the sun is just an angry star? Rising calmly with the cool morning air, but never recognized for it's contributions and abilities to help love grow. Relying on the wind for a chill breeze as it curses the land with rays of heat and haunts the trees with shadows of rage. Until it's emotions have finally piqued with frustration, does the sky turn red, and do you realize you have taken for granted the light of the world as it falls furiously behind the mountain, only to face another ungrateful day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/5/2018 6:02:00 PM
Some great writing!
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Date: 3/30/2018 6:51:00 PM
Hi Kristin, Nice to meet and welcome to ps , I love your write full of emotional description lovely style you have ::)))Hugs from Ireland~~~Niall
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Date: 3/30/2018 6:14:00 PM
Poor sun he'll have to carry on...full of gasses and explosions...but shine he must shine...Nice little poem...All the best K
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