Emotion a Freed Verse
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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment
EMOTION
transformed
the clouds part
the sun explodes
in
a sweep
of the majestic
lacing alongside
&dancing
shameless
in a glow
of affection
participating
in a
shadow
cast by
threads
exploration
accompanying
exhibition
dissolving
boundaries
to convey
&
celebrate
an inveterate
adventure
gesturing
to
the passionate
within
a mystery really
triggered by
love
closely associated
by the physical
&knocked
sideways by it
to recognise
the power
thereof united
a one one
full of depth
&beauty;
Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2023
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