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Emo Love

When our hearts collide all I saw was black With each step I took I never looked back As we both go on our separate ways We both remember that special day That when ones first love had kissed with shattered heart Our hearts collided back into one black heart

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Date: 8/17/2011 3:34:00 PM
you need to work on the last 2 lines & the rhyme..your form is couplet light & love
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