Sandra Adams Poet Rhyme

Emmanuel

there is a cool rain falling down on me
it wakes me from the pain of love's faded memory
we are in every breath of November's lonely air
all my days and all my nights we still do share
I still feel your love raining down on me 
I wish in your arms I still could forever be
although our paths may never cross again
I will keep you safe within November's rain

(piano)


within this cool November rain falling down on me
as long as i still live we will always be
in memories alive as we were before
I will love you darling forevermore
                   
                          11/21/21013

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Pashang Salehi March 6, 2016 at 1:29 AM Very nice.. When you transcend heart and soul as well as mind, It is like giving sight to the blind. Love is forever.

Timothy Hicks February 14, 2016 at 10:39 PM Beautiful poem that shares once again that special connection you have with nature. In the middle you say "piano" ... is this poem also a song? My favorite line is this, "we are in every breath of November's lonely air"...

Poet Destroyer A January 10, 2014 at 4:23 PM Sandra, .. I posted a new poem would you like to take a trip and read my poem..... You will find your name on my latest... hehehehHeheheh, WARNNING!!! It is a long poem... :) :) LINDA

Dr.Ram Mehta December 15, 2013 at 8:40 AM Enjoyed reading this poem in the season and congratulations on the win, Sandra

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 15, 2013 at 8:38 AM Congratulations Sandra xx

Sheri Fresonke Harper December 14, 2013 at 7:42 PM Sandra, excellent poem of love tied in with the rain, congratulations on your win. Sandra Adams December 14, 2013 at 8:59 PM Thank you :)

Chuck Melugin November 24, 2013 at 10:14 AM November forever! Great job Sandra! Sandra Adams November 24, 2013 at 10:18 AM thank you Chuck...I guess because it is November right now it became November's rain...but it seemed to fit perfectly...:)

Ravi Sathasivam November 24, 2013 at 6:53 AM Excellent. Beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs Sandra Adams November 24, 2013 at 10:17 AM Thank you Ravi...I put many hours into this piece :)

Joseph May November 24, 2013 at 6:18 AM beautiful poem Sandra....nicely composed Sandra Adams November 24, 2013 at 10:16 AM thank you Joseph :)

Sara Kendrick November 24, 2013 at 6:13 AM I could hear the music in my head so that is good..Enjoyed reading your lyrics for the contest..Reads like winning material to me..I noticed your comments about my and I was glad that you did a review..It was encouraging..Sara Sandra Adams November 24, 2013 at 10:16 AM Thank you Sara...I loved that music...I didn't think I could do this challenge at first, but as I listened to the music over and over it became more a possibility...hugs :)

Andrea Dietrich November 24, 2013 at 2:57 AM gosh, Sandy, all you guys doing this challenge are making me feel small. I simply can't see myself doing a poem for this one though i heard that song and it was lovely. Yours is outstanding. Sandra Adams November 24, 2013 at 10:13 AM isn't that melody beautiful, yet sad? I think you should try it... if you break it down to parts it is much easier... and thank you for your kind comment :)

Len Gasun November 23, 2013 at 11:23 PM Wow, my very dear friend, Sandra! Your excellent poem turned out to be a very beautiful and outstanding music as i read all its contents and amazing lines. You're both a great poet and composer of songs/music. I salute you. loving this so much. I'll try to play this on my keyboard using your lyrics. Taking this on my fave. TYSM! Good luck in the contest, but I'm sure this will win. Have a grace-filled wkend. love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora Sandra Adams November 24, 2013 at 10:11 AM wow thank you my sweet friend Leonora... this one took time and many retries to get the words were I wanted them...the melody was so beautiful and towards the end it started to speak to me... your comment has made me smile :) hugs

Carrie Richards November 23, 2013 at 10:01 PM Hooray.........this is gorgeous, Sandra !!! Isn't this the most beautiful music?? And you have done it justice.........I know how tricky this melody was to fit just the right words.....and you nailed it !!!! I think this is perfectly lovely........good luck in the contest....I see a winner!! Sandra Adams November 23, 2013 at 10:09 PM Thank you Carrie...the music was beautiful and sad...I wrote the same section over and over again for days until it seemed to fit to my liking...I took a liking to the tune and feel he made a great choice for us to write to ...and yes it was very tricky :) hugs