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Emma the Little Pony

There once was a pony named Emma. Emma was the littlest pony on the farm. She was even smaller then Katie the sheep dog. But she knew if she just tried she could win the Ponyville Farm Race. See this was important to her. She wanted to prove to the other ponies and animals that tease her that she could be mighty and fast. So just maybe they would let her eat her hay with them. So every night, she ran within the fields of neighborhoods pastures. She worked every morning as well and ran instead of trying to fit in during hay time. The other ponies often laughed at her but she still worked at this race. It made her feel good, and often she thought even if she didn't win she did a lot. She was running faster and longer each morning and night. Then soon it came, race day. Emma was scared but she was proud she was standing up with the other ponies. Then the bell sound went off, 123. It was time too run. Emma ran faster and faster. She could see all the other ponies behind her but she couldn't see the rock ahead. As fast as she was running she feld to the ground. But then something amazing happen Kayla a often mean pony came to help. She was in front of Emma just a little bit and must of heard the fall. They both lost the race, but learnt something much more important then winning. Soon after this Kayla and Emma became the best of friends. Kayla learnt that Emma was fast as she is mighty. And that she in the other pony wasn't nice for teasing Emma. Some ponies realise this and some didn't. And that was okay with Emma. Cause she learnt her worth. The End For a contest Children story Written for my niece.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/25/2016 1:37:00 PM
HOPE YOU WIN....LINDA
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Samantha Withee
Date: 5/25/2016 5:42:00 PM
Thanks It's my first children's story
Date: 4/29/2016 9:06:00 PM
You did a good job You capture a kid story very well Good luck I give you a six rating.
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Samantha Withee
Date: 4/29/2016 9:29:00 PM
Thanks.
Date: 4/29/2016 8:44:00 PM
A cute children story Very smart idea with the my little pony fever going on. Bet you're niece loved this story. Very good story and lesson for Emma to learn.
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Samantha Withee
Date: 4/29/2016 9:29:00 PM
Thanks And why yes kids love ponies and my niece has that fever you mention.
Date: 4/29/2016 8:29:00 PM
Very well-written I like how children can debate and feel free to figure out their own meaning to the story. It's very well-designed to children and well established for them. You did great. Good luck, on the contest.
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Samantha Withee
Date: 4/29/2016 9:28:00 PM
Thanks That's was what I was going for. Glad you enjoyed it, I'm new to storytelling

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