Eminent Domain

You stood there in the empty room
with sadness on your face
a memory of years gone by
lay silent in its place
A house you’d built
with your own hands;
no longer yours to own
against your will, abandoning
this place you once called home
The old wood floors were splintered now
and flagstones on the hearth
seemed to whisper "take us too
don’t leave us in the dark!”
A tired broom leaned wearily
against the fireplace
and wind that moaned so eerily 
blew through without a trace
It rattled soft the dingy glass
within the windowpane
and seemed to call
“this house will fall to eminent domain”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Adams Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 4:30 PM
Another one that took me right there! Great write!
Duncan Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 10:39 PM
Awesome write :) Eminent domain is sad.
Rodd Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 5:37 AM
Thank you for reading and I agree ^
Green Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 9:12 AM
Kind of a sad and lonely piece my friend, though filled with amazing imagery that places the reader right in the scene. Really nice Gayle.
Rodd Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 5:38 AM
thx Chris. I could have written a book with all the images this evoked in me.
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